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forgive spelling, i cook and shoot for a liveing, so im no lingwistic expert lol.
im baceing this on my zombie plan Operation island set up, names can be changed and ideas can be added.
seen: opener
Place: porirua, store window.
Cam: watching t.v., slow zoom into the full screen pick
Setting: town center.

T.v. news presenter: We interupt the reegular programing but we have just been informed that a intence crime wave has hit welleington and auckland with reports of people being bitten and atacked by members of the public, we have a video of one of the atacks, we warn all viwers that the footege we are about to show you has not been faked and has not been edited, it contanes footege thet young children and the faint hearted should not watch, you have been warned, this video has been sent to us from a member of the public from a cellphone.

[slide to vid]

vid shows a group of people running from something people are screeming and running like crazy, the image pans to the things chaseing the people, its a hord of humans covered in blood they are hissing and moaning ect, one of the people on the group stops and turns to the hord, he draws a gun, he shoots 2 shots no one falls down, he emptys a clip into the hord, he starts walking back changeing clips, he downs some, then falls on his arse, the hord jump on him malling him and eating him, the guy is screeming like fuck!

[cut to the presenter]

The reports do not seem to be limited to welleington and auckland, reports confurm that this is happening all over the world, we now recomend that you lock your doors and stay inside, do not open your doors for anyone or anything, and may god have mercy on all of us.

fade out slowly to black

Jax: My name is Jax Knight, i am a surviver liveing on mana island with others, i am broudcasting on all A.M. and F.M. signles as you all know there has been a brake out of a infection, the infected begin to atack the liveing people, there is a safe zone on mana island about 4km south west of titahi bay beach in porirua, we can provide food and safty to anyone we will be wateing at titahi bay beach every morning at 4am till 7am. if you can meet us there and you will live.

fade out to seen 0

seen: 0
Time: 4am
Place: titahi bay beach
Cam: chasing the group of 20
Setting: night on the beach little lights and there holding torches ect

Tani: Run there gaining
Peter: wate up guys!
John: hurry the fuck up
Stef: [screeming] my arm
[Tani and john stop to help steff, shes a long way back, the group goes ahead.]
Peter: you guys are on your owne!
Tani: fuck you peter, John, start the boat, il buy you guys some time.
[tani starts shooting rounds into the hord, he fires his last shot and thros the gun , tani runs to the water]
john: hurry up tani.
tani dives into the boat, and starts laffing.
Tani: were in the clear!
a zombie thats latched onto the boat bites peter on the sholder.
john: fuck[ punching it off]

It will be longer when i put it into the script this is just an idea what do u think?

Seen: 1
Time: Dawn
Place: Mana island, new haven.
Cam: Over the shoulder of a sentury gard in full armor, odst looking armor.
Setting: Tower 1, south side of island, Rikis lookout

Gard looking out to main land, on the hurizn we can see a small R.I.B comeing fast twords the island.

Riki: [over the coms], James, its Riki we have 13 people comeing twords the island, no wepons in the boat that i can see, one looks like a possable infected, better wake Jax up.

Janmes: [over coms], Rodger that, conferm, 13 people, one possable infected, i'll
Go wake him up now.

Riki: thanks, and get tom down to the holding chamber, tell him we might have a guest. [ Riki turns to cam, we cant see his face as its covered by a helmat, walks past cam off screen in the fade away we can see the black R.I.B comeing to the island.

Seen: 2
Time: Dawn
Place: Mana island, new haven
Cam: Foot of jax's bed
Setting: Dark lit concreat room, steel door

[James is nocking on Jax door]
James: Jax, wake up, we got some new people wateing for your inspection.
[cam pans from door to Jax's bed]

Jax: whats the time?

James: [opening the door] Its dawn we got 13 new people comeing to the island bringing the population up to 375 but......

Jax: [eyes still closed] James you know i dont like it when you but.

James: [looking at Jax] one may be infected, Riki spotted it befor they even landed .

Jax: okay well set up the containment chamber, tell tom to get down there, we have to iceolate him until we know for sure.

James: he's already there, we just need you at the gate for the orientetion and to set up there duties.

Jax: okay il be ready in 5.

James: rodger that sir, i'll be in Rikis tower if you need me. [he says as he closes his door]

[cam pans to Jax, jax has his back turned away from cam and he is putting on his body armor, we can see big scars on his back, scars run acros his back over his tattoos]

Seen: 3
Time: sun is low in sky aprox 7am
Place: new haven
Cam: looking at a small group of refuges, cam focus on lil girl who is crying
Setting: the 1st gate, 2nd is closed.

Jax walking on screen from the right, the group is talking to the gards and the people are pulling there raft onto the beach.
Jax is wateing for them just out of the waters reach, wereing his black armor sidearm on his hip and rifle on his back

Jax: good morining, my name is Jax, welcom to mana island or new haven as the staff like to call it, i am one of the founding members of new haven, my title is raid leader and inspection leader, as you can see all the sentury gards are armed at all times, we have a 24 hr gard that is ready for anything and everything, mana island is 100% contained we have a outer wall around the island and a 2 gate systm in a second i will open the other gate and we can begin the orientation, there is one rule on the island lisn to what i and the other leaders say and no one will be in harms way, if you have a problem with that i sudgest you get your arse back on that raft and get the fuck off the island,... Now befor we get underway is there any questions?

little girl: [rises her hand, canm focus on her, she is crying she looks about 7]
Where have you taken my daddy?

Jax: [getting on eye level with the little girl and speeks in a soft voice]
We think you dad is sick, we are putting him by himself untill we know if he is sick or not, dont worry hes safe.

Jax: [stands back up] any more questions?

John Bishop: Whae you said raid leader did you mean on the mainland?
we just came from there its suacide when we were makeing out way here there were atleast 20,000 infected in porirua alone and that number is getting higher, as if they know to go there, how manny people have you lost since you started raiding?

Jax: 3 in the last year, dont worry i take every precortion to keep the men and woman under my comand safe at all times, we have set up a safe zone in titahi bay, when we land on the marrina there we take an A.P.V to where ever we think will be the best place to look for gear.

Tani karoria: what about survivers

Jax: if we can find them we try to save them, but we put our safty first, we are not any good to people dead
Now if you would plz follow me il take you to your tempoary accomadations untill a more sutable place can be found.

John bishop to Tani karoria: this guy seems to relaxed to confadent in his plans!

Seen: 4
time: unknowen
Place: new haven iceolation chamber,
cam: mid shot of toms back, we can see a guy straaped into a chair
Setting: Iceolated room, white tiles cover walls, light above the chair looks like the one in a dentists, he is hooked up to a diallisis and centerfuge machene.
Tom has his m16 trained on the guy while 2 drs work on him

doctor 1: patent 011803, Male, age aprox 34 years, possable carrear of the thrasher virous, shows tipical behaviour of an infected yet centerfuge and blod work show up as a dormant and or inative state, as far as we can tell its a negative reasult???

Tom: Dock it would be nice if you could use english for the every day guy , ya know
so yes or no can i shoot him yet? [lowering his M16]

doctor 2: What hes trying to say is this guy is not fully infected yet, maby another cupple of hrs and then he will be beond human, when that happens you can shoot him but untill then we have to moniter this transformation

Guy in chair shakes violently brakeing one wrist strap, tom rases his M16 cocking it, and takes aim, the 1st doctor pushes the barril of toms M16 up into the air.

Doctor 2: What did we just finish saying? trigger happy son of a bitch.
tell us what u think!

seen: 5
Time: Aprox 9am
Place: New haven, innergrounds, temp acommadations
Cam: side on , from the middle of the room ,everyboddy is picking out there bunks.
Setting: Temp house

Jax: Well i know its not much to look at but its safe, we encorage couples to sleep together to save room, [Jax's pager goes off]
Well i have to go, but feel free to roam the grounds and find out how we opperate things i will leave you guys with my brother untill we can get your places in new haven sused, oh i almost forgot, Any one with combat training and experence pleese step follow me and give your names, service, dutys and rank now pleese

2 men stand ford,
J.B: John bishop, seaman combat specualist, leading hand, n.z. navy
T.K: Tani karoria, Sniper, Warrent officer, sas

Jax: Karoria? any relation to mike karoria?

Tani: yea he was my older brother.

Jax: sad to see him go, he was won of my best men. well lets get to it, the reason i called you guys out was we neen more people like you guys, people who know what to do in a war zone, we nead help its no surprise but we need all the help we can get.
im asking you to put your lives in danger so others can live in a safe place, we grow moast of what we need , we have the equptment to make drinking water but we need medicens, other food scorces, and fule.

Tani: so whens the next raid?

John: never mind that, we are unarmed, how do you expect us to pull this off?

Jax: look around, all my fighting men and woman are armed havent you notest that,
we are all ex militery ,police, mercx, whatever, point is we have more wepons then we need, and everyone on the security detail and raiding partys has one.

Tani: can i pick what ever i want?

Jax: we have a cupple of snipers who grab extra guns on there ops we got anything
from 22 to 50cals, pick anything and stow it in your locker in the armory.

Seen: 6
Time: 10ish
Place: new haven aromry
Cam: looking at all the guns on racks
Setting: well lit room with 200ish firearms

Jax: [ opening the inner door of the armory leading them into a room full of guns and armor] So what do you guys think of our little shop?

Tani:[with a dumbfounded look on his face] how did you get all these in a month?

Jax: like i said we are all combatents we like to be prepared for anything.
So take your pick guys.

John: ya dont have to tell me twice [he says while picking up a G36]
Seems weard that you guys are so well prepared, i mean this of all things
falls in the unpossable catagorry, who thorght zombies would come to life?

Jax: well befor all this started we heard it was just a report of people going crazy
and atacking others but we knew, hell people called us crazy for thinking this
could happen. [ zyp poaster in the background lol]

Tani: well i guess it goes to show anything can happen now [ he says lifting a 50
call semiauto sniper onto a counter] where do i sign for this?

Jax: ya dont need to, now suit up, your going to meet the guys who will more then
likely be saveing your ass.

[they walk to a "rolla-door that open showing a teem of guys in a dry dock working on one of the boats, they are talking amoungst themselfs untill jax' walks into the room, they all salut him]

Jax: at ease boys, James, whats the sisuation on the boat?

James: she will be ready in 30 min, just got to bolt on the new moter and fill er up.

Jax: ya got 20, guys this is Tani and John, they will be comeing with us on this raid, look after them, show them the ropes and make sure they dont die, now introduce yourselves, i got to get riki and then were off. [ Jax walks off screen]

Ant: Welcom to the shit storm boys, [Ant is a huge black guy, im thinking the guy from green mile] my names ant, i speculise in makeing doors and fucking shit up, this is rocky [pointing to a maori guy with dreads] hes out resadent stoner, and hes an artist with a shotgun, this is James [pointing to a tall lanky guy] our sniper, tani you'll be working with him alot so learn from him, [points to a small well built maori guy, thats D hes a sord master or some shit, hardly ever talks but when he does you sould lisen, [Jax and Riki walk in] you know Jax, and this is his older brother riki, riki works with a Xm8 and on this raid hes also our driver so we gotta look out for him.

Tani: kea ora guys, guess il be covering your backs.

John: hey nice to meet yous.

Jax: okay thats enuf of the introductions, now we lill be looking around the CBD in welleington today so we will be useing the navle port in welleing as our snipers perch while the raid team goes into collect some surplys, rember this is a stealth mishon we dont want alot of noise so D your takeing the point, everyone elec get tatical use scilencers, and rocky for the love of god, make sure you have something other then a shotty on you.

Riki: okay guys like jax said were going to be quiet on this one, keep raideo chatter to a minamal, snipers have tactical comand now suit up and ship out.

seen: 7
time: 11:30
place:New hahen, dock
cam: From the covered garrege
Setting: Guys are pushing the boat down the ramp, useing a winch.

Jax: slow down guys your going to topple the boat over, okay we reach the mainland at 12:00 from there we take the A.P.Vs to lookout tower one, it over looks the chemist, reports say it wasnt looted and still contains all the surplys that we will need for a year or so.
snipers will cover all the exits and will clear a parth, scilencers will be used, and guys we have to go back to useing sords, knives and machetties, untill i say so use anything but firearms.

Riki: D you got lead rocky you got left flank, ant you the rear, jax is on the right
i will be useing the gun on the A.P.V to keep you covered, john will be loader, are we clear on the jobs?

Raid party: [all together] yes sir!

[everyone gets on the boat while loading the guns and ammo
James: [stating the boat] we are all ready ta go.
[boat pulling away, seen skip to open water, guys loading there guns.

Ant: Tani, John, you guys going to be okay? heard this is your 1st day on the raiding party, and your 1st day at new haven.

Tani: yea we landed on the island about 3hrs ago.

Ant: well your going to enjoy the raiding party. we got about another 30 min till we reach welleington so just go over the plan in your head, clean your gun while you got the chance aswell, wouldnt want it jamming.

Tani: thanks for the advice, [lighting a smoke] dont worry i got a good gun and a good aim.

Ant : okay just rember when your helmates viser is down you can link up with the snipers scope and look for our heat signitures, if you see anything that isnt us shoot it!

faid out seen

Seen:8
time: Noon
place: Welleington navil port
cam: top of a building looking down on the boat comeing to the dock
setting: dock in welleington, larger ships around the port sum sunken shipz in background

the coumpound where they get off the boat looks like a bus depo, but insted of a chainlink fence its all heavy iron walls, think berlin wall maid of metal, main gate is a iron 2door gate that opens into another corradoor then to a 2nd gate like the 1st.

Ant: this is it guys [he says as hes tieing the boat up]

Riki: tani you and james head up to the roof of the building we move out when you guys are set up, i want both of you up there with extra mags ar the ready.

James: coppy that sir, come on tani [ them 2 wolk off carrying a heavy ammo crate]

Jax: guys you all got ya sords or knives ready?

D: yes sir, i decided to sharpen all the sords befor we left[ kicking a crate to Jax' feet] theres one for everyone

Jax: good work D, every one do a once over on your guns, Ant make sure you got some granades or explosevs ready ta go, we never know whats going to happen.

John: sir i know this area well the streets will be cloged with dead and cars how exactly are we getting around?

Riki: in this [Pulls a green cover off a huge nz army A.P.V] 10tonns of your shit out of luck if you get in my way, its fully moddified, we stuck a turbo desel engen into this baby, its got a plow and one more nice touch, [spining a minni gun around on the top of the A.P.V] 1000rounds a second higher power then an a10 worthogs, the shells we use are 50 call rounds so il be able to shoot through the walls to keep you guys covered, rember use your HUD interface, its got a locator, range finder, inferred, night vission, and its 100% sealed your armor will protect you from scratches and bites so dont worry about throughing a punch or a kick.

Tani: [over coms] Guys were in posision and ready to fire, theres alot of deth down there, alot of its moveing too, no survivers seen yet, will scan agen with the heat trackers on.

Jax: coppy that Tani, okay guys fall in to the A.P.V.

Seen: 9
Time: 1210.
Place: welleington CBD.
Cam: on the gate tracking the A.P.V.
Setting: heading out og the gates into town.

Riki: seal the hatches boys, here we go.
Aproching 1st gate now, [gate slowly opens like a ranchslider, makes a noise like a rusty door] going in to the coradoor now, 1st gate closeing.

Tani: Riki, you got contacts moveing in slowly, do you want us to open fire?

Riki: yea fire at will aslong as you have the scilencers equpit, we dont want them being drawn to you.

James: rodger that capten, bringing down the rain now

Riki: rodger that, 2nd gate opening [apv moves out into the street]

Cam: ontop or the apv looking ahead seeing 2 zombies drop to the ground as apv comeing out of the gate[ it closes behind the apv, one of the zombies gets close to the APV a shot hits the zombie and its head comes clean off landing with a thud on a cars hood and the alarm goes off.

Riki: fuck, guys go hot!

Cam: moves back to show rocky opening the hatch and moves to the gun of the apv swinging the gun and aiming it at zeds comeing from the allyways

Rocky: i love this gun! [ rocky opens up shooting everything in site]

Ant: Rocky calm down with that gun man we gony got 7000 rounds.

Jax: hes right were 1km away from the target building, so slow down on the ammo Rocky

Riki: incomeing car, we gotta speed up and ram it.

cam: moves to looking at a car from 20m away, the apv speeding up and rams the back half of the car sliceing str8 through it creating a fireball

Ant: BOOYA BOY

Jax: half way to target

Riki: [looking into the rearview cam], Rocky behind us!

Rocky: [swinging the gun around] Fuck since when can they run like that?
[rocky fireing into the hord]

Jax: 300meters, Rocky you gotta down them befor we get to the target

Rocky: yes sir!

D: [looking out of the port window] sir, the virous has muetated, animals look loke there infected,

Cam: from accross the street, we see a dog eating a corps of a dog as the APV goes past and rocky shooting the hord from the back of the apv.

John: can this day get any fucking worse?

Riki: yea it can were 100 meters away from the target, and you guys gotta get on foot
soon, rember grab anything that looks useful, ya know bandegs, antisepticx, first aid kits anything, ill keep you covered with the gun. [riki slowing down the apv bringing it to a stop.]

Jax: okay guys get your healates on, rember use heat signs and tint on visers.

Seen:10
Time: 1230
Place: new haven iceolation chamber
Cam: thomas P.O.V
Setting: dark concreat room, alot of zombie noises

D.R.1 : patient 011803 shows extreem rage and tipical infeted behaviour, his strength has nearly tripled, his eyesight is minamal, blood work shows that he is infected with a meutated version of the hunter virous, due to the nature of the meutations we have had to bump up the security measures we have added chains and extra straps. we are dubbing the newstrain "the thrasher virous".

D.R.2: with the meutations does this mean they will be harder to kill?

D.R.1: as far as i can tell bone, skin and musil dencity has increased, the paient has also growen another 30cm and has added another 20 kgs to his mass, so yes they will be harder to kill.

Thomas: [smokeing a cigerette] Grate just what we need, they were hard enuf to kill in the 1st place, okay change of plan we move this fucker to the fireing range, i need to see what tipe of ammo works the best on it.

D.R.1: NO we have to moniter him, if im right this is just the start of the changes, there is on way to tell how he will change

Thomas: well seeing as its my fucking teem you guys seem so keen in putting at risk we do it my way, 5 extra gards in here all with 50 call weapons.

D.R.2: sir im inclined to agrey with the p.o. it this thrasher gets loose theres no telling how manny it could kill or infect.

D.R.1: okay thomas you get your wish, you get 5 armed men down here with a glauss gun, that should be more then enuf to turn the thrasher into mince meat if it gets loose.

Thomas: yea sir [walking out of the room and starts talking over the coms]

seen:11
Time: 1215
Place: drugstore
Cam: side of the glass door
Setting: all natural lighting, rows and rows of meds

Jax: im going to open the door, when i do fall out into posisions, john your job is to stick on the door, ready Go [jax opens the door and D is the 1st out]

[they all get into there posisions and D kicks the door open, sord at the ready, a zed jumps at him from across an counter, D sclicesit cleen in half blood goes everywhere]

D: looks clear guys, ant check any rooms that you can find, kill anything thats not human.

Ant: rodger that, you guys start loading the meds up, [ ant opens the the staff only door, something jumps at him, he grabs it by the neck, it screems and hissesz, he pulls the large hunting knife out from a strap from his chest and stabs it in the head] Fuck i think that was the manedger!

Jax: what are you worryed about, ya think we can still get a store discount?

Ant: Fuck you man, want me to check the till?

Jax: yea grab everything.

John: why would we need money?

Riki: we use it to buy thiings from the army and navy guys.

Tani: hey guys ya might wanna hurry your arese up! we got something big heading your way!

Rocky: how big?

James: like oh my fucking god big, i think its the same thing that killed tess.

Riki: hurry the fuck up guys, we are not gonna wate around for this thing to get here!

John: mind filling me in on this thing?

D: we call it a mamoth, another meutation, dangerous as hell,as far as we can tell nothing can kill it, not even the 50call minigun on the A.P.V, that just pisses it off.

John: ah okay well were almost done, tani and james, can you slow it down?

Tani: we can try we brought an anti-maieral cannon up with us its a 100 call shell, it should fuck it up!

Ant: i straped a kg of c4 to it once, it didnt of shit all , if anything aim for the eye or ear that should get his atention

James: as far as we can see it dosent have eyes.

Riki: fuck it just gets better and better, aim for anything not covered by bone

Tan-james: rodger that

Seen: 12
Time: 1245
Place: outside the drugstore
Cam: tracking jax from the apv
Setting: loud footsteps with something banging buildings in the background

Tani: takeing 1st shot, aiming for the temple.
[loud gunshot hurd, followed buy the sound of something big falling into a building]
Fuck yea hes down!

Jax: good shot tani, just keep him down were about 2 min out, just finished loading the stuff.

Tani: rodget that. the mamoth is going to be in your parthway so be kwik!

Riki: will do , thanks for the heads up, okay guys fall in!

[all them carry crates into the A.P.V john is the last one out of the store,]

Jax: close the door were off, rocky i want you on that gun now!

Rocky: yes sir, you want me to shoot the mamoth when we get to it?

Ant: fuck that i got a trick i wanna try

Riki: will both of you shut the fuck up, if all goes to plan we can drive right past it [riki starts the engen, and they move out,]

John: man this city has changed in the last month.

Rocky: ya got that right, ya should have seen the change Ant made when he brought an entire buildin down on a hord of zombies hahaha that was fun!

Ant: ya got that right, now if i could do it to the big fucker that would be sweet!

Jax: 700m from target look sharp rocky it could be anywhere

Tani: hate ta spoil the party in there but hes getting up, and he doesnt look to happy anout the new hole i gave him.

Riki: i think we might have to take the long way?

Jax: or the over pass and just run through the chain link fence?

Riki: i like your thinking bro

[ they get onto the moter way and we get our 1st glimps of the mamoth, its 15m tall built like a tank with boney armor like plates over its body]

Rocky: stop the A.P.V

Riki: are you fucking kidding me? we gotta get the fuck back to new haven,

D: no hes right this is a chance to give this guy a beeting he'll never forget

Jax: stop bro we gotta ake this op while we have it!

Riki: fine but if any of you die im not draging your sorry asses to new haven.
[apv stops on a over head bridge] they all fall out into a fire line and start shooting the mamoth witch is about 20m away from them.]

Rocky: ima open up on the gun!

Ant: you do that iv been dieing to try out some home made granades on this fool
[he says as he tosses something that looks like a pipe bomb]

[they all are shooting, we see some zombies running from the over pass to them]

Rocky: take the minigun Ant, D your with me, we got smoe hunting ta do.

[rocky and d charge the zeds rockys shotty at the ready and D looks like a ninja with his sord in its sheath, his right hand on the grip, they start going back to back as the hord moves in closer and moves all around them, ant swings the gun and statrs shootin the hord.

Ant: so i have to save your ass agen? thats the second time this week man come on stop playing with your girlfriend and get back to the A.p.V, the mamoth is on its ass nows our chance.

Rocky: fuck you man are you forgetting the time in the subway in porirua, i saved you!

[all of them fall back into the apv when hey do riki drives off, the mamoth heres them and charges the overpass, takeing out a piller the a.P.V goes tumbling down and lands on its side,] the mamoth loses all intrest and walks away thinking they are all dead]

[view from the inside of the A.P.V]

D: you guys okay?

Riki: i think my legs broken

Jax: dont worry bro were gonna make it back, only 200m ta go

Ant: if you guys can keep me covered il carry him.

Riki: no the blood will atract more zeds, maby even the mamoth, you gotta leve me behind.

Rocky: fuck that man your going back to new haven and your gonna live, how elce will i collect the money you still owe me?

Seen:13
Time: 1300
Place: welleington cbd/docks
Cam: follows riki then stays at the side of the apv

Riki: the leg is fucked, i wont be able to walk on it!

Jax: D make a splint useing 2 of the sheaiths from the sords, use the bandges to tie it up to him,

D: got it, ant you sure you can carry riki? its going to be 200 meters and we dont know how many zeds we got between here and the gates, even then we might have to go up aganst the mamoth!

Ant: dont wory, its not the 1st time iv'e had to carry riki home, i'll carry him and he can shoot over my sholder.

Rocky: okay i got point, D you bring up the back, john and jax, you guys take the flanks

Jax: lets get him out, rocky cover us while we set ant up.

Cam: we see rocky climb out, he pumps his shotty then takes a shot, the apv is on its side, with its nose toching the ground.
Ant climbs out

Jax: okay rikis ready.

Ant: pass him on up

Cam: jax pushes riki up riki reached out and ant grabs his arm riki is pulled out and jax puts him across his shoulders in the fireman carry.
when riki comes out the cam follows him, we can see things falling from the collapsd bridge, twisted bits of concreat and rebarb can be seen from the bridge and on the road , one slab is hanging loosely above the apv.

D: your up next john

John: dont have to tell me twice [he says as he climbs out]

D: Jax you climb out and pull me up

Jax: you got a deal
[they do it cam moves to jax's back we see Ds hand being pulled up]

D: what do we wanna do with the backpacks and the meds?
[Riki, john ant and rocky ane standing on the street in formation they all are armed]

Jax: MOVE! [Jax tackles D down to the street and a slab of concreat falls onto the A.P.V crushing half of it]

D: fuck that was close!

Jax: what the Fuck!, we got no apv, no meds and to top it the fuck off rikis legs fucked!

Riki: calm the fuck down, look get james on the coms, tell ham and tani to get the F250 and pick us up from the stadium its about a block away from here not to far at all

Ant: says the one being carryed.

Jax: yea, okay bro, [pressing a button on his helmate] James, tani theres been an incodent the apv is fucked, the meds are gone and rikis got a broken leg, lissen we need you guys to pick us up in the F250 from the stadeum...... no the bridge colapsed thats the only place to pick us up from...... yes i know its probably filled with zeds, you got the gun on the 250 just shoot anything in the way.
oh and bring the big gun, we might need it.

Seen: 14
Time: 1315
Place: iceolation chamber, newhaven
Cam: focused on the thresher
Setting: Heavy lockdown

Tom: [smokeing] I fucking hate haveing to babysit the doctors experements, to top it off its the moast dangerous one yet.

Lacey: [who is female btw] Boss, what do we know about this guy anyway?

Tom: well this sorry son of a bitch came in with the others this morning, as far as we can tell this guy has a meutated verson of the standered hunter virous, they call it a thresher, all i know is hes alot bigger, a lot meaner and fucking harder to kill, now we got it here iv'e got guns aimed at it and i dont have a fucking order to kill it!

Lacey: you might, your one of the five founders, your jax's right hand, could'nt you just over rule this experment and shoot it?

Tom: I can get a isue s kill ordet if this thing becomes a threat to the island or the staff, and to my knowlege it hasnt done that yet, so were stuck on gard duty untill the doctors say whats going to happen next.

Lacey: why do the doctors call the shots?

Tom: because Jax and the others want to know how these things tick, i just want to know the best way to kill them.

Lacey: so is the first time you have had to babysit?

Tom: no time to time we get one in, people usualy think we kill the infected on sight
but this is what we do, aparently its more humane if we wate till they have turned befor we kill them.

[Cam pans around the cerculer room to show 2 steel doors on difrent sides of the room aswell as tom lacey and 3 other armed gards, one of the doors slides open the doctors walk in holding a neadle with some black flued in it]

Doctor 1: we have your kill order, we belive what we are going to inject it with will thin out its mass meaning its going to be easer to kill.
[the dr walks behind the straped down zed and injects it in the neck, the zed howls and moves about, we here everyone cocking there guns]

Tom: everyone on the 50 calls, doctors i would ask that you stand behind us.
[the doctors get to a safe place, the for other people jump on the 50 calls, tom and lacey have no helmates on so we can see nicely who they are]

tom: aim for the chest and head, Ready, Aim ,Fire [shell cases fill the air the noise is deffining, over moast we can here the glauss gun that toms operating fireing hige rounds some how the zed is abzorbing the pain and the builets are bounceing off him]

Zed: howling

Lacey: ITS BRAKEING THE STRAPS!

Tom: RUN, hit the alarm!

[ the zed trus to stand up fiping some straps and chains off ,we can see the a doctor and lacey takeing the him out of the building, tom and the others are still shooting at it, the other dr grabs s m16 off the wall and opens fire, the zed starts to shake then apers to die, the straps still holding him down are riped and the chains have been shot off]

[the DR goes in for a closer look, he cheeks for a pulse, he turns his back on the zed]

Doctor 2: its dead, the injection must have worked.
[he turns back around and lets out a screem, we see an arm barke out the back of the doctor]

Tom: SHOOT IT!
[they start fireing agen and the zed stands up and tossed the doctor at tom nocking him across the room the zed starst slashing and tossing the others in the room killing them all] [the zed walks over to the last guy who is cowering behind the desk, the zed slowly aoroches him, and readys its self for s swing of its claws,tom jumps on its back and stabs it with a knife cutting across its chest,it sticks in, the zed tossed tom off him and into a wall, it walks over and stomps on his chest killing him instantly, as the fade out slowly hapens we can here the holws of the zed and the screems ot the last guy being killed, then we see the zed slowly draging the boddys off to the steel door thats been locked down.

there we go i have a plan for that knife and a meet up of some sort for jax's team

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This is pretty slick, I wouldnt mind a quick scene involving the characters on the boat before they land. Also i like the beginning of it no info just two names and what seems to be a highly organized system, reminds me of the opening to 28 days later.

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[quote=PoseidonNo problemo, one question though.Do you get to shoot what you cook and cook what you shoot?[/quote]

we do hunting some times when we are in countres and i shoot deer ect and cook them for the guys, and i have only shot a steak once with a 9mm hollo point, we wanted it tenderised and yea we had our sidearms on us

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ive got more written up, but i hate tipeing lol

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Now with seen 5!

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Im loving where this is going man, Between your movie, lud's book and kuma super secret zombie play (He'll deny it) We got mad creativity going on.

One small suggestion between scene 2 & 3 It would be cool to see a scene of the refugees on the boat and have them paddle up to shore Jax comes up and basically tells the group to listen to him or get the hell out of the island. Also a bit deeper explanation by jax in scene 3 would be good. Oh and

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seen 3 has now got the lisn to me or fuck off bit and more detail will be added but what kind of detail would you like, I.E statous of the main land the raid details talk to me here

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seen: 7
time: 11:30
place:New hahen, dock
cam: From the covered garrege
Setting: Guys are pushing the boat down the ramp, useing a winch.

Jax: slow down guys your going to topple the boat over, okay we reach the mainland at 12:00 from there we take the A.P.Vs to lookout tower one, it over looks the chemist, reports say it wasnt looted and still contains all the surplys that we will need for a year or so.
snipers will cover all the exits and will clear a parth, scilencers will be used, and guys we have to go back to useing sords, knives and machetties, untill i say so use anything but firearms.

Riki: D you got lead John you got left flank, ant you the rear, jax is on the right
i will be useing the gun on the A.P.V to keep you covered, james will be loader, are we clear on the jobs?

Raid party: [all together] yes sir!

[everyone gets on the boat while loading the guns and ammo
James: [stating the boat] we are all ready ta go.
[boat pulling away, seen skip to open water, guys loading there guns.

Ant: Tani, John, you guys going to be okay? heard this is your 1st day on the raiding party, and your 1st day at new haven.

Tani: yea we landed on the island about 3hrs ago.

Ant: well your going to enjoy the raiding party. we got about another 30 min till we reach welleington so just go over the plan in your head, clean your gun while you got the chance aswell, wouldnt want it jamming.

Tani: thanks for the advice, [lighting a smoke] dont worry i got a good gun and a good aim.

Ant : okay just rember when your helmates viser is down you can link up with the snipers scope and look for our heat signitures, if you see anything that isnt us shoot it!

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omfg blades is on!

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im really likeing this

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look at the new bit iin the main body

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Time: 4am
Place: titahi bay beach
Cam: chasing the group of 20
Setting: night on the beach little lights and there holding torches ect

Tani: Run there gaining
Peter: wate up guys!
John: hurry the fuck up
Stef: [screeming] my arm
[Tani and john stop to help steff, shes a long way back, the group goes ahead.]
Peter: you guys are on your owne!
Tani: fuck you peter, John, start the boat, il buy you guys some time.
[tani starts shooting rounds into the hord, he fires his last shot and thros the gun , tani runs to the water]
john: hurry up tani.
tani dives into the boat, and starts laffing.
Tani: were in the clear!
a zombie thats latched onto the boat bites peter on the sholder.
john: fuck[ punching it off]

It will be longer when i put it into the script this is just an idea what do u think?

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new seensz look at the opener and seen 0 the newst bits
i have seen 10 writen up in my book but i will put it up soon

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I like your creative outlook on it dude

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thanks man

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you guys who havent read this need to.
guve me ideas for what elce happens, im thinking that jax was the one who kicked off the zombie thing!

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I like it ^_^

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good any ideas?

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nope :D its really good. i cant think of anything, but if i do ill tell you ^_^

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cool, kinda want to kill one of them off lol

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cool new bits are in

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i keep reading it and waiting for more i really do like it

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thank you il add 2 more seens in 24hrs, im working tonight so its going to be hard out

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seen:11
Time: 1215
Place: drugstore
Cam: side of the glass door
Setting: all natural lighting, rows and rows of meds

Jax: im going to open the door, when i do fall out into posisions, john your job is to stick on the door, ready Go [jax opens the door and D is the 1st out]

[they all get into there posisions and D kicks the door open, sord at the ready, a zed jumps at him from across an counter, D sclicesit cleen in half blood goes everywhere]

D: looks clear guys, ant check any rooms that you can find, kill anything thats not human.

Ant: rodger that, you guys start loading the meds up, [ ant opens the the staff only door, something jumps at him, he grabs it by the neck, it screems and hissesz, he pulls the large hunting knife out from a strap from his chest and stabs it in the head] Fuck i think that was the manedger!

Jax: what are you worryed about, ya think we can still get a store discount?

Ant: Fuck you man, want me to check the till?

Jax: yea grab everything.

John: why would we need money?

Riki: we use it to buy thiings from the army and navy guys.

Tani: hey guys ya might wanna hurry your arese up! we got something big heading your way!

Rocky: how big?

James: like oh my fucking god big, i think its the same thing that killed tess.

Riki: hurry the fuck up guys, we are not gonna wate around for this thing to get here!

John: mind filling me in on this thing?

D: we call it a mamoth, another meutation, dangerous as hell,as far as we can tell nothing can kill it, not even the 50call minigun on the A.P.V, that just pisses it off.

John: ah okay well were almost done, tani and james, can you slow it down?

Tani: we can try we brought an anti-maieral cannon up with us its a 100 call shell, it should fuck it up!

Ant: i straped a kg of c4 to it once, it didnt of shit all , if anything aim for the eye or ear that should get his atention

James: as far as we can see it dosent have eyes.

Riki: fuck it just gets better and better, aim for anything not covered by bone

Tan-james: rodger that

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dubl poast lol, can a mod remove one plz?

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oh man this is fucking great. I love the YZP cameo you snuck in the gun supply room scene (6)!

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do you think i should wright up a backgroung for the guys in the movie?

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now with seen 12 in it, seen 13 may or may not come up 2morow, ive got plans with the g.f. so if i can ill put it up

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do you think i should wright up a backgroung for the guys in the movie?

yes.

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OKAY im thinking about changeing some things ay like james beeing a chick.

and somehow the camp not be to safe like the one they got lockd up escapes

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yea if anything hes a lisser person, any ideas about names? i think we have to manny J names

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Katie or Alix?
theyre not too bad names ^_^

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no not katie, had an ex-girlfried with the same name, the nightmeers didnt stop for weeks

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lol! ^_^ well i dunno, it was a suggestion :P

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i know but i didnt seem right, im atculy in the proces if doing the 13th seen, i right it up on pad then tipe it

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yay, type it quickly please ^_^

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only if there was a way that you coud see what i write as i do it!

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Seen:13
Time: 1300
Place: welleington cbd/docks
Cam: follows riki then stays at the side of the apv

Riki: the leg is fucked, i wont be able to walk on it!

Jax: D make a splint useing 2 of the sheaiths from the sords, use the bandges to tie it up to him,

D: got it, ant you sure you can carry riki? its going to be 200 meters and we dont know how many zeds we got between here and the gates, even then we might have to go up aganst the mamoth!

Ant: dont wory, its not the 1st time iv'e had to carry riki home, i'll carry him and he can shoot over my sholder.

Rocky: okay i got point, D you bring up the back, john and jax, you guys take the flanks

Jax: lets get him out, rocky cover us while we set ant up.

Cam: we see rocky climb out, he pumps his shotty then takes a shot, the apv is on its side, with its nose toching the ground.
Ant climbs out

Jax: okay rikis ready.

Ant: pass him on up

Cam: jax pushes riki up riki reached out and ant grabs his arm riki is pulled out and jax puts him across his shoulders in the fireman carry.
when riki comes out the cam follows him, we can see things falling from the collapsd bridge, twisted bits of concreat and rebarb can be seen from the bridge and on the road , one slab is hanging loosely above the apv.

D: your up next john

John: dont have to tell me twice [he says as he climbs out]

D: Jax you climb out and pull me up

Jax: you got a deal
[they do it cam moves to jax's back we see Ds hand being pulled up]

D: what do we wanna do with the backpacks and the meds?
[Riki, john ant and rocky ane standing on the street in formation they all are armed]

Jax: MOVE! [Jax tackles D down to the street and a slab of concreat falls onto the A.P.V crushing half of it]

D: fuck that was close!

Jax: what the Fuck!, we got no apv, no meds and to top it the fuck off rikis legs fucked!

Riki: calm the fuck down, look get james on the coms, tell ham and tani to get the F250 and pick us up from the stadium its about a block away from here not to far at all

Ant: says the one being carryed.

Jax: yea okay bro, [pressing a button on his helmate] James, tani theres been an incodent the apv is fucked, the meds are gone and rikis got a broken leg, lissen we need you guys to pick us up in the F250 from the stadeum...... no the bridge colapsed thats the only place to pick us up from...... yes i know its probably filled with zeds, you got the gun on the 250 just shoot anything in the way.
oh and bring the big gun, we might need it.

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I'm the spark that makes your idea bright
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fuck, thats awesome ^_^

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to short look on google tipe in welleington stadium, thats where i want them to meet up, they have to cross a train yard to get there!

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yess, will they get ambushed? ^_^

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maby im thinking of something later the next bit will be in the iceolation chamber when the guy tom realy opens up

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littery i meen

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kwik won wrote:
yea if anything hes a lisser person, any ideas about names? i think we have to manny J names

what about:
Aaliyah (sounds like a-lee-a)
Bride
Tashia
Trisha
Ava
Alexis (call her lexie)

thats just a few of the top of my head

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im trying to work in a thing about Toms twin sons, caster and pollarx.
im tipeing up seen 14 as we speek, iv also got seen 15 writen up but il tipe it when i get back from work.

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14 is up as you can see

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Seen: 15
Time: 1330
Place: train yard
Cam: following the group
Setting walking through the train yard, its a maze of totaled and broken trains.

Ant: were almost there riki, hold on.

Jax: hold up, picking up a heat sig, i think its a zed.

D: are you sure?

Jax: its human sized, who in there right mind would be out here if its not?

Rocky: form up, bring it in.

Jax:[looking at a screen on his wrist] behind the container

D: i got this one. [D slowly aproches the container, sord at the ready, he goes to swing as he turns around the corner and out of sight, a gun shot is hurd]

D: Jax you need to see this.

Jax: [walking to D] what is.........[we see a preast in full robes] oh this if fucking ritch, just what we need some fucker looking for a safe place to hide his sorry ass, whats your name?[the others come onto screen]

Farther kealeb: kealeb, farther kealeb, of the church of faith.

D: What are you doing out here kealeb?

Farther kealeb: thats farther kealeb to you!

Rocky: fuck it lets leave him

Farther kealeb: No you must take me, for im a man of god, he has sent you to my side!

Jax: no we are heading off the mainland, were meeting up with our transport about [looking at his wrist comp] 100m west, we are already transporting a wonded so you are at the bottom of my priortys list at the moment.

Farther kealeb: But im a man of god!

Jax: then why dont you fuck off and pray.

Farther kealeb: I did and you showed up, dont wory evel will not halm us while im with you.

Jax: comeing from a preast holding a gun, yea thats so reasuring.

Farther kealeb: the gun is not for them, its for the people that may harm me on my way.

Jax: well like i said were off.

Farther kealeb: You must take me, you are a man of faith are you not?

Jax: no a am not.

Farther kealeb: then what do you belive?

Jax: haha belive, im not payed to belive, im payed to fuck shit up, look, if you want to come with us fine, but you have to be able to hold your owne, if you become a therat to the safty of my men or myself you wont have to worry about the zombies killing you.

Farther kealeb: Zombies?.... these are not zombies there thoes who hell could not acommadate, this is the day of judgement.

Jax: will you shut the fuck up with your religious bullshit, we dont have time for it, now if you would kindly sut the fuck up and form up we can go.

Camo: as they slowly walk away firearms at the ready Farther kealeb starts saying the lords prayer, he is is shakie and on the far right, they walk through a maze of trains walking through the poen ones when the chance arizes they soon get to a clearing where a they walk over a Train turn table.

D: everybody get down
[ant sets riki downall faceing difrent directions, all are set up for something big]

Jax: what did you see?

D: something has been folowing us since the apv
[we hear a shreek and see many figures apear in the trains and containers, there small and sleek looking bauld and very pail]

Rocky: Oh Brin It On [cocking his shootgun]

John: heat scaner puts there numbers at 74.

Farther kealeb: were doomed!

Riki: shoot now, bitch later.

Ant: here they come!
[in the background we here gun fire]

Cam: zeds run at them from every angle sprinting and jumping towords them, D pulls
out 2 gold eagles and opens up, cam pans to Jax, he is useing a xm8 takeing very precice shots cam pans to riki,hes sitting on has arse, shooting a saw in fullauto, cam pans to john useing an m16 in burst fire, cam pans to rocky takeing shots at a range of 10meters, takeing out 2 zeds with one shot, cam pans to Farther kealeb who has a cult 44 peace maker he is slowly shooting but is not hitting anything cam turns to ant who is useing a granade launcher with grate sucess, blowing up heaps of them with one shot the zeds get in closer, about one meter away frm the turn table, they begin to jump onto the platform of the turntable, one jumps for rocky, he nails it in one shot, sending it flying into a switch that starts the turntable spining slowly, one gets Farther kealeb and he is pulled over the edge of the table, at the last seconed ant grabs his arm and pulls him back up one jumps at ant, bringing ant down, we see a knife sticking out of the zeds back and ant flips it off of him, one jumps at riki, it starts trying to bite at rikis armor, riki punches it, fliping it over and pushing its head over the edge of the table, another pole conects with the zed decapatateing it.

Jax: guys thats them!

Farther kealeb: who?

Ant: our ride.

We see a black truck smash through a chainlink fence and run into a hord of zeds, they go flying and sckatter, tani shoots the gun thats atached to the truck, clearing a parth for the guys to run to the truck, ant puts riki into the back seat of the cab jhon and D hop into the back seat aswel, Farther kealeb takes shotgun Rocky ant and jax jump into the tray of the f250 with tani, they speed off driveing over a zed and through another chainlink feince, they come to the frount of the stadium, about 50m away the mamoth brakes through a wall of the stadium.
ant stands up holding his granade launcher, he fires 8rounds at it bringing it to its knees, the zed slowly gets up to its feet when the cam pans to tani who lugs up his 100 call rifle, it lands on its arse in a daze, as they drive past we see D open his door, sord in hand [its made out of greenstone and not metal] he swings out from the door his sord scliceing off the mamoths head. Jax tossed a brick of c4 just to be safe, ant pulls D onto the tray from his armor jacks hits the detanator and Boom

Ant: Fuck yea that was off the hook boy!

D: that was for tess.

Farther kealeb: Are you crazy? how did you know it would work?

D: i didnt

and thats it for now. as always tell me what ya think

I am the stone that builder refused
I am the visual
The inspiration
That made lady sing the blues.

I'm the spark that makes your idea bright
The same spark
that lights the dark
So that you can know your left from your right.
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fuck thats long !

just rember the year is 2019
okay Rikis Background

Name: Riki Tangaroa
Born: 20-1-90
Race: maori
Hight: 6ft 3in
Skin colour: light brown
Marks: tamoko on left sholder, left sholder blade, left fore arm

history:
riki went into the NZ navy shortly leaveing college [high school] he joined as a gunner, shortly after he was promoted to the title of leading hand, he is Jax's older brother.
5 years after joining the navy he was asked to join the sas task force where he had see moast of the horrers that effect his life to this day, confirmed with bipolar disorder he was medicaly discharged 2 years befor the zombies atacked, shortly after the news of the atacks he got word from his brother that he was comeing to pick him up.
during his time withen the sas riki forght in the
the korean war,2010
the german war,2010
the european war,2011
the anzac war,2012
the bloody harvest,2013
the battle of the dead sea,2014
the islam-iran wars,2015
WW3,2015-2017

he earned the victoryrs cross twice
the D.H.A
and the navil valler medal

I am the stone that builder refused
I am the visual
The inspiration
That made lady sing the blues.

I'm the spark that makes your idea bright
The same spark
that lights the dark
So that you can know your left from your right.
-Asheru-

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